hurry up and finish turning her into a guy!!

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Later! There are other ones I must do first.

Her legs look really nice. And I love the water- you did a really nice job with the coloring, not just here, but with the whole picture.

I'm a bit bothered by her right arm, though. It seems so limp compared to the left one, almost she has no muscles in that arm and just lets it flop wherever. Also, where exactly on this rock is she sitting? Right now, it looks as if she's sitting on the side of the rock that's facing away from us. If that's the case, why hasn't she fallen off?

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That's completely ridiculous.

Thank you. I was actually getting quite bothered by the right arm myself. I think I should go back and reshade it.

To tell you the truth, I wanted to focus on the character so much I didn't really notice that until now. This is something I'll try to fix as well.

Thanks for the critique!

No problem!

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That's completely ridiculous.

Looks pretty good.

Like how the foam on the water was done, have to try that myself.

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This is really nice.
I like how well the background is done, great job with the coloring.
However, feet should be about the size of the forearm, and the hands should be about the size of the face.
Hope that helps some.

Thanks.

I will definitely keep the feet/hand thing in mind for my next drawing.

I love how you did the water in this. It's so beautifully done. And the rock has some great toning and shading, as well!

A little advice: The right hand is a little small. Hands, from middle finger to wrist, are as long as from your chin to your hair line. Her ear is a bit small, as well. That should be lined up from eyebrow, to the bottom of her nose. Her hair looks a bit flat. The line art for it should be a little thiner than everywhere else- also, add a bit of highlights and a few loose strands outside of the lineart! Her necklace also needs a bit of shading on it, as well as around it on the skin.

*shifty eyes* Don't kill me! *still timid after getting flamed for critiquing three other people's works.*

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